Showing posts with label Island. Show all posts
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Thursday, August 6, 2026

A Short Story



 

“Like frog we are asked to know when it is time to refresh, purify, and refill the coffers of the soul.”—Medicine cards, Jamie Sims & David Carson.

 

Hey, everybody, I'm glad to have you here. You are the best to hang in with me through thick and thin, messes and cleanups, mistakes, typos, and all. I try to be good, but miss sometimes.

Okay, this has been my last few days: I took my short story, novella I had called it, off Kindle. I don't know if anyone was reading it anyway. I have no way of knowing, although data might be in the bowels of Amazon for all I know.

Now that's a disgusting thought.

Anyway, I like the story, but it needed work, so I revamped it, went over it word by word, inch by inch, paragraph by paragraph, until I gave myself a headache, and decided to give the story away for free. (Hold a bird in an open hand, or frog in this case.)

You might have read something about this story in an earlier blog, but I’m back at it, and as a writer, you know a piece of writing is never perfect. (Once a writing teacher said, “All art is flawed, which gave me hope.)

While reading about the toy frog a child has in this story, I was motivated to buy a plush CoQui frog toy off eBay this week. I had bought one when we lived in Hawaii--can't find the same one. It was cute, and when you squeezed its belly, it said its own name, “Co-Key.”

One day, one of our dogs, then a puppy, got the frog, and “Goodbye, frog.”

(I will post a picture of my frog when it arrives.)

Another idea in this book I got from Hawaii was that someone had offered a green frog toy, prettier than the brown Coquis, with the instructions to carry that frog with you on your adventures, write your adventures in its accompanying book, and give it to another traveler who will add their stories. It’s a fun idea, but those things fall flat and grind to a halt, and you never hear of them again.

Here, if you wanted, you could pretend that you are carrying a frog and a journal, and write down something funny, inspirational, or profound. We would love to read one or more of your gems.  Keep going for the link.

 

“Frog sings the songs that bring the rain and make the road dirt more bearable.”

—Medicine Cards, Jamie Sims & David Carson.

(My inspiration for using the Frog’s Song in a couple of titles.

I will post a picture of my frog when it arrives.

You may have heard me talk about the CoQui frogs of Hawaii before (an accidental import from Puerto Rico)—they are only about the size of your thumbnail, eat bugs and insects, and say their own name “CoQui,” which is to call a mate.  In mass, they can be loud, causing some to call them noise pollution, but that was not my experience. I thought they were sweet, and from a distance, innocent me who didn’t know they existed, thought they were birds.

All this is leading up to my presentation. Ta Da! In my effort to be transformational, I am presenting this short story, 5,850 words.

 

When you are in Hawaii, and you find a sign alongside the Highway saying “Voted the best café by my mother,” with an arrow pointing to a road through the cane grass. Take it.

You will bump along a lava-encrusted road with grass slapping the sides of your vehicle until it opens to a sandy beach beside a café. Above the entrance of the café, on its thatched roof, is a sign that reads, The Frog’s Song Café’. Go in, have the best sandwich you have ever tasted, and accept their invitation to a campfire at the beach, where you will find…

Well, I’m not going to tell you; read the book.

 

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Monday, October 20, 2025

We Need a Little Magic

We need a little magic. In that vein I have begun a series of novellas, all under 10,000 words. The first was “Where Tigers Belch,” the second is “Where the Frogs Sing Café.”

I have revamped There the Frogs Sing Café, and released it, and am offering an excerpt here.

I hope you enjoy it for I got a kick out of writing it. I felt privileged that it took me to Hawaii again, and there I found a little grass shack, uh, café, hidden off the highway on a lava encrusted road through tall cane grass.

At Where the Frogs Sing Café you will meet Zane who cooks the best hamburgers ever, and his Butter Mochi is out of this world. You will meet Felicity and her little daughter Sunshine, but the main food of the day, that for the soul, comes later on the beach where you are a part of a specially invited group who watch the sun go down.

You are privileged to experience the “green flash” a rare atmospheric condition that happens as the last rays of the sun dip below the horizon. That event is said to bring good fortune or spiritual enlightenment.

I invite you to join our group as together we watch the sunset and where Zane offers fresh insight for three college girls on summer break.  Where else do people frequently stop what they are doing and watch the sun go down?

More than likely, it is on an Island.

 


 

 

Table of Contents

 

Chapter 1 Where the Frogs Sing Cafe

Chapter 2 The Green Flash

Chapter 3 Yes, I Can

Chapter 4 Who Created This System Anyway?

Chapter 5 A Dip

Chapter 6 A Story

Chapter 7 Morning


Frogs sing the eternal call to life and happiness.”

   


 

1

"Where the Frogs Sing Cafe'"

 

“There it is!” Carolyn yelled.

I almost stomped on the breaks, but first looked in the rear-view mirror to see if any cars were behind me.

No, Highway 11 on Hawaii wasn’t busy. I let the jeep slow to a crawl, and turned to Carolyn, “You almost made me wet my pants.  "What are you talking about?"

"The sign. About 100 yards back." She strained against the seat belt while pointing behind her.

"It said Where the Frogs Sing Café," and there was an arrow pointing that-a-way." Carolyn pointed to the right.

 "Oh," you mean the one that snorkeler guy told us about?"

 "Yeah, the one you were flirting with, he said it was a shortcut back to our condo,"

 "I saw a sign too,” said Freda behind me, “but couldn’t read it.”

 I wasn't flirting, but let's check it out.".”

 Still no cars were coming so I slowly backed the jeep to where Carolyn pointed, and there it was at a break in the cane grass beside the road, a bright yellow sign that I had missed, "Where the Frogs Sing Café," with an arrow pointing to a road that disappeared into the grass. "Are you game?" I asked.

 "Yep, yep."

 The road didn't look like one that would lead to a café, but after our day of snorkeling in the ocean, sunning on the beach, and being wind-whipped in an open-air jeep, we were exhausted and starving.

  So, we entered a lava-encrusted road where the cane grass slapped our jeep on one side, and pumice bits from the road pinged the vehicle on the other.

 After about one quarter mile the road ended at a strip of golden/white sand. And there on that beautiful sand sat a Robinson Crusoe-style shack with a sign under its thatched roof, Where the Frogs Sing Café.

 I cut the motor, and a stillness settled over us, but in the distance, we heard the sound of the surf.

 "Jo," Carolyn attentively asked, "do you think this is safe?"

 "We have only met friendly people," I said. "This looks like the sort of place poor college students would frequent, a Barefoot pub on the beach. Besides, do you think that fellow we met while snorkeling would steer us wrong? He seemed nice."

 "Well, since you were flirting with him, it's no wonder he was nice."

 "All the more reason to trust him. He was flirting back." I opened the car door and swung my legs out.

 “I though you said you weren’t flirt…”Freda, dark-haired and tanned the color of toast, poked Carolyn who was, like I, tanned the color of and lobsters thrown into boiling water, and they both laughed.

 “I lied,” I said, and we three entered the café, bedraggled after our wind-swept day.

 A young woman smiled at us and pointed to a booth beside a bank of open windows.

 "Three beers," called Freda, "anything cold."

 Hamburgers were the fair of the day, as indicated on the chalkboard. Freda was reading, "Burger with cheese, without cheese, with goat cheese, Swiss cheese, with caramelized onion, tomatoes, pickles…"

 "I think I'll have a burger," said Carolyn.

 A girl who looked like Drew Barrymore with hair to her shoulders and a smile that just didn't quit brought three beers with limes on top of the bottles. I was immediately drawn to her.

 Something about her made me smile, no matter how hungry I was. She wore a pink tank top and jean shorts, covered by a small apron printed with Toucans, and she wore rubber surf shoes.

 I wondered what she was doing out here off the beaten path, not a lively pub I would expect for a young woman as lovely as she. After she had placed the beers on the table, she stood there, pen poised in hand and slowly counted: "One, two, three, four, five, six, seven. Did you hear how loud that seventh wave was? It beat the shore like a rocket."

 We looked at her questioningly, ordered hamburgers, and she left.

 I began to count the waves. When I got to the seventh, WHAM! it crashed against a rocky shore. Soon, we were all counting. Yep. The ocean was accurate. Repeatedly, the seventh wave was the loudest.

 The girl arrived with a tray of the most enormous hamburgers I had ever seen. "You came fast," I said.

 "Counting the waves gives starving people something to do while they are waiting."

 "I laughed, "You had a method in your madness."

 "You betcha," she said, slipping an over-filled plate to each of us. A wrapping of colorful waxed paper kept the enormous hamburgers together, but left a portion sticking out, ready for a bite. A haystack of fries sat beside them, with a small purple orchid perched on its top like a teeny squirrel guarding its cache. I love it when my food comes served with a flower, a common occurrence in Hawaii.

 "Thank you," we three said, taking our little orchid flower and slipping it into our frizzled, wind-blown hair. Carolyn took a bite of a French fry, then, waving the other half, announced, "This is the best fry I've ever tasted."

 "Those are tempura French fries," said our waitress, "a specialty of the house."

 We looked toward the chef, or whoever you call someone in a small café like this, who stood behind a bar flipping something on the grill. "We waved, and he waved his pancake turner back.

The waitress acknowledged a couple coming in the front door, "Hi, Emily. Hi, Lee," she pointed to a booth. "Enjoy, guys," she said to us. "I'll be back."

 We dove into those burgers, catching the burger juice with our napkins, and munched and drank until the enormous burgers were nothing but a greasy spot on the paper that had wrapped them.

We yelled "Cooks parade," and waved to the large Hawaiian cook/chef behind the counter. He waved and held up a finger, indicating one minute."

 "What makes these burgers so exceptional?" I asked the cook when he came to our table.

 "Mom grows the tomatoes. She picked yours this morning, which was after Grandpa poured a bucket of seawater on them the night before; the salt makes them sweet. Mom grows the lettuce and onions, too. A bakery delivers the buns, Grandma makes the dill pickles, and the beef is Angus grass-fed. Being served by a beautiful woman doesn't hurt either."

 "Well, you've ruined us for anything else now. We'll have to stay here forever."

 He smiled, asked for our names, shook our hands, and introduced himself as Zane.

 "A present," he said, setting a small bottle of vinegar on the table. The vinegar is for your red skin; it will help keep the blisters away."

 He moved away with an "Aloha," and went back to his kitchen.

 When the girl came back to our table, she said, "That's my Daddy."

 The three of us were stunned and didn't say anything, just looked at her, then at the man behind the grill who had black hair pulled back in a ponytail, and biceps the size of wiener dogs with geometric black tattoos encircling their bellies.

 "My adopted dad," she said, acknowledging our bewilderment.

 "He rescued me when I was a pregnant beach bum, kicked out of my house by my parents."

 "You didn't grow up here?"

 "No, I'm from San Francisco.

 "What is your name if you don't mind my asking?"

 "Felicity."

 "Happy," I said. "Felicity means happy." 

 "Yes. I gave it to myself after I had my baby girl."  

 "Are you happy, Felicity?" I asked.

 "No one is happy 100% of the time, but I'm happy 95% of the time. There's the reason." She pointed to the door, where a blond, tanned, barefooted little girl about six years old peeked into the room.

 When her mom's index finger wiggled a "Come here," she burst into the room, ran to her mother, and threw her arms around her hips. She looked like a sea nymph, in a green smock printed with sea grass and sea turtles. Her hair looked like her mother's but had that delicate child's shimmer to it. It looked freshly shampooed and had a green ribbon that had once tied it, but now it hung sideways, tangled in her hair.

 "Sunshine, dear, meet some nice girls from the mainland. This is Jo."

 "Hello Sunshine," I said, "I'm so happy to meet you."

 "Me too," she said and hugged me.

 "And this is Freda and Carolyn," her mother said. They put out their arms, and she slid into a hug. "Bye," she said and ran off to throw herself into the arms of the big man behind the grill.

The other two couples were chatting sweet sounds behind us, and Sunshine seemed to know them, as she had waved when she came in. This café appeared to be the happiest place I had ever seen.

 Sunshine came to our table with a plush brown toy in her hands, "Would you like the Coqui Frog? she said. "See, you press his belly and he says his name." She pressed its belly, and he clearly said, "Co-Qui."

 "How cute," I said, taking her frog and pushing its belly. "But we can't take your frog."

 "He isn't my frog. He's everybody's frog. He's an experiment. Someone else had him, and they kept a little book to write down whatever they found to share. They said to either pass it on or send him back to us."

 "That would be fun," said Freda, "Let's do it."

 "Tell your momma, we'll do it."

 "Okay." She ran off.

 Felicity's face it up, and she smiled at us.

 Soon Felicity was back at the table. Can I get you anything else? I'm happy you took Sunshine's frog. I can't wait to read what you guys write. That way, we will be somewhat connected. I always enjoy reading about what people see or feel. I'll give you the little journal that comes with it. The first folks who had it wrote briefly about some of their experiences." She started to walk away, then turned and said, "By the way, we are going down to the beach for a campfire this evening. Would you join us? It will be the people in this room. It's a short walk to the beach."

 "Gosh, I'm tired," said Carolyn. "Maybe we should get back to our hotel."

 "Oh, I hope you will come," said Felicity, "at least to watch the sunset."

 "Let's do it," said Freda."

 "Yes, I said, that sounds like fun. Come on, Carolyn, let's do it."

 We agreed.

 "Great. Freshen up and follow the trail behind our shack. We'll be there in about 15 minutes."

"We'll show you the way," said the couple at the other table. "Hi, I'm Emma, and this is my husband, Lee." We shook hands, introduced ourselves, and aimed for the door.

 The air was smooth as silk against our sun-brightened skin that now smelled of vinegar as we followed our newly acquainted friends down a sandy path to the beach.

 We could hear the surf pounding a steady beat, and it was clear that someone often came here, as there was a circle of bricks that made a fire pit, filled with fresh wood.

 "Were you guys planning this?" Carolyn asked the couple.

 "Oh, we often come here. It's our recharging place. Where else do folks stop to watch the sunset except on an Island?"

 

2 

The Green Flash 

  

"Is there any truth to the sun making a sizzle as it goes down?" asked Frank, the fellow of the other couple.

 Sunshine, who had just arrived with Felicity, Zane and the other couple, piped up, "Silly, the sun doesn't go into the water, but some of the kids think it does."

 "What about the flash I've heard about. Is that true?"

 "The green flash? Yes, it's true. Zane, as seen one, haven't you Zane?'

 "Yes, I have. The green flashes are rare and hard to see, but let's watch, maybe we will see one tonight."

 We all became quiet and focused intently on the horizon. And then as the last light of the sun slipped into the water—I saw it. It was not a flash at the horizon as I expected, but a glow like a tint of green had been squirted into the air. One could easily miss it if they were expecting a big flash.

 The others were silent. Had they seen it? We were stuck dumb until Sunshine screamed, "I saw it!"

 One by one, the rest of us admitted that we saw it too. Most of us were afraid it wasn't true, or that we had imagined it.

 "I saw it right at the horizon," Sunshine said.

 "I didn't," I said, "but I saw something green."

 Each person shared a slightly different experience. When so many admitted that they had seen something green, we whooped and applauded the mystery of it all.  And we fell back on the blankets laughing in gratitude.

 That settled us all into a surreal experience, a shared event.

"Boy," said Carolyn, "I'm glad you guys didn't listen to me when I wanted to go back to the condo." I'm fully energized now."

"This is a magical place," I said, and meeting you guys out here in such an isolated place. Where did you come from?

 "Oh, we live close by," said Zane. "This is our spot."

 "Well, thank you for inviting us," said Freda.

 "Dido," said Carolyn.

 "What causes the green flash, Zane? Do you know?" Frank asked.

 "It has to do with atmospheric conditions. It's rather like a rainbow, in that the atmosphere between us and our view of the sun causes a refraction that separates the green from the rest of the colors. On truly rare occasions, a blue or purple flash follows the green, but I've never seen either of them.”

 Felicity added, "Mythology says that the green flash brings good fortune, or spiritual enlightenment."

 "We are awed by events we don't understand," said Alice, Frank's partner, "especially in the sky, or in beautiful things we see on earth. Have you ever read the little book, Where Tigers Belch?

 "Yes," said Felicity, "that is where we got the idea for the name of our café.  Amber, who visited us once, wrote the story.”

 "What is the book about? I asked.

 "You tell them, Alice," said Felicity.

 "It's about a young woman, about you girl's age, she was a junior in college too. She lived in Africa near a jungle and decided to set out one day to find her purpose. She declared that it would be where a tiger belched that she would find it.

 "Does she?" I ask.

 "You will have to read the book to find out."

 "Ah, Alice."

 "Grandpa," asked Sunshine, yawning and probably tired of adult talk, "can I have one of your Butter Mochis before I go to sleep?

 "Indeed, you can, Princess," he said, and went to the wagon to retrieve a rectangular pan of what looked like a cake. He cut it into squares, dug one out for Sunshine, and handed it to her. “These are for everybody,” he said, “whenever you are ready for dessert.”

 "What is a Butter Mochi?" Freda asked.

 "It is made with rice flour, coconut milk, milk, eggs, and butter, and has an unusual texture and is delicious."

 "Grandpa, can I have a second?”

 "You can have as many as you want, as long as you leave enough for the rest of us."

 "Well, I'm pretty full," I said, "but curious. May I have one?"

 "Absolutely," I made them for all of you, help yourselves." Zane set the pan in the center of the group, and everybody took one.

 "Zane," I exclaimed, "everything you prepare is exquisite. This Mochi is such fun to eat, like a buttery gummy bear cake."

 He laughed and opened the ice chest. "We have ginger beer, very gingery, non-alcoholic, Lilikoi soda, and water. Help yourselves. And for you, Carolyn, Freda, and Jo, rub this on your skin; it will help it heal. This is aloe vera,” he said, snapping a succulent leaf in half. “Rub the juice on your fiery skin. It will help it heal.”

 The three of us caught the oozing juice and gently applied it to our vinegared skin. It was soothing.

 "Thank you, Zane. Are you a shaman or something like that?"

 He laughed. 

 I looked at Sunshine, a little angel, fast asleep, slumped against her mother with her second Moshe half-eaten still in her hand.

 Felicity gently took the cake from her hand, lay her down, and covered her with a blanket.

 "What a sweetheart," said Freda.

 "My reason for being clean and sober and having a purpose in life."

 "Is it to have a child?" I asked.

 "That and others," she answered.

 "Like what?" I asked.

 "Like to share the goodness of life, to motivate others to go for their dreams, and not frivolously waste their precious life. Do not go with the group if that group does not support your magnificence. A life is a terrible thing to waste. I found that out on the streets of San Francisco, but those streets gave me Sunshine. That experience sent me here, and Zane saved me. I am grateful."

 "Tell me," Carolyn asked, "how does one go about finding their purpose? I have one more year of college, and your friend who wrote the book did as well. Did she go on to become a professional in her chosen field?"

 "She went out to follow her dream. If you have something you want most of all in the world, that is God talking to you, whispering, saying, 'Go for it.' But sometimes it takes the journey for you to find it.

 "Like jump and build your wings on the way down, as Ray Bradbury said?"

 "Sort of like that," said Zane, "but don't do that from an airplane."

 "Many students at the beginning of their college education do not have a major in mind," offered Lee, "Doctors even, often choose their specialty after they have experience under their belt. Sometimes our journey is college, sometimes it isn't. Especially for those who don't know what in the heck they want."

 "What about me?" asked Carolyn sadly. "What impact will I have on this world?

 “I’m a psychology major,” Carolyn continued, “and three years into it, but when I look at the world, I don't see many psychologists making a significant impact. I see people struggling. I see them in poverty. Some go to therapy for 20 years for Heaven's sake. Don't get me wrong, I believe in therapy, but it has to be good therapy. People don't change unless they want to or are forced to, such as when they hit rock bottom.

 “Do I go into social work? “Does that make a difference in people's lives, or would I be doing it for the salary?

 “Does the social system change behavior? You put kids into the social system, and they often get abused or molested. How depressing is that? Do I go into private practice? That means more school, and my folks mortgaged the house to send me to college thus far. They wanted me to get an education. But more school?"

 "Never rule out what education can do for you." Zane said, "Right now, it is getting you to ask the right questions."

 "But where are the answers?"

 I could hear her voice about to break. And I knew enough about therapy not to pat her out of it so she would shelf the problem.

 "The pain you are in now, my dear," said Zane, "is part of the process. I am sorry, but it is. Going for your dream more than likely won't be easy. It requires a steadfast purpose and a belief that it will happen. 

 Carolyn put her head in her hands, and I ached for her.

 

3

 Yes, I Can

  “We know there are burdens out there. We know that people are suffering. You wonder if all the sacrifices you and your family made will ensure you a decent job. You feel that freedoms are being taken away. You worry about the future. Look at Sunshine sleeping peacefully. Didn't Jesus say that we should become as little children? Shouldn't we trust?"

 "Yeah, Kane," said Frank, "tell that to a slave."

 "For every positive aspect we put out, the brain, like a watchman, will counter it with something negative,” said Lee.

 "Sorry I did that," said Frank.

 "Look at the babies," said Zane. "Those little spark plugs arrive all wide-eyed, expecting fun and good times. They smile, giggle, kick up their heels, and are eager to learn new things—like walking, talking, running, and playing with wild abandon. Don't we want them to have a happy life? The voices of the world —from institutions, culture, parents —although well-meaning, often say things like, "You know you can't have everything you want."

 The little soul would say, "Yes, I can, Yes, I can."

 "'You are not the center of the Universe,' the world tells them.

 "'Yes, I am. Yes, am.'"

 "That's who you really are, dear ones. Instead, you are acting like a toddler who stuck a pair of scissors into a light socket. Oh, that hurt.

 

4

Who Created This System Anyway?

 

 "Our little campfire on the beach is for simpatico people who will hear our message and will be elevated by it," explained Zane. "We are fearful human beings; if something physical isn't chasing us, we will make up a mental image to do it. We hope to calm the terrified beast."

 "We are something like an underground railroad." Added Felicity. "Zane was that underground railroad for me. He picked me up from the Streets of San Francisco and put me on a boat to Hawaii, where a group of tahunas took me in. They said to me, ‘This is your chance, baby, are you going to clean up your act, or abandon and ruin your child?'

 "'I never will,' I yelled. 'I will work. I will pray. I will do everything in my power to raise this child to be a good person.' I set out to find Zane, and did. The rest is history. Zane and I formed an alliance, a café, and a belief system."

 "This is your time to become the warrior," Zane said. "It's the time to stand steadfast in your knowledge that there is a force stronger than you and that you have access to it."

 "What do you mean?" I asked.

 "Have you heard of the power of belief?"

 "Sure, like the Placebo effect."

 "Yes, that works," said Zane. "If we believe that a sugar pill is the medicine that will heal us, what happens? Often, we become healed. Yet, we had no medicine, yet we were healed. What did it?”

 "Belief," said Frank. "We know that ultimately it's the body that heals. However, medicine can give it a boost when its energy doesn't seem strong enough to do the job. Others can trick us into believing a sugar pill is medicine; however, it seems we can't fool ourselves."

 "What if," offered Zane, "we held our dream with such tenacity that the storms of life could not push it away from us. The winds can blow, the rains can come, but "I will stand firm,' you say. 'I have the power of the Universe behind me.'  

 "Don't let God off the hook. Remember the amputee, Lieutenant Dan, in the movie Forrest Gump, who held onto the Shrimp boat during a storm and yelled to God, 'Bring it on!'

 "You yell back at God and say that 'I am a part of you, and I will not succumb to the dark force that is trying to pull me in. Don't you think God, the Power, the Universe, the Force, would say, "Well done, kid. I'm proud of you."

 "Wow, said Carolyn, I hadn't thought of it that way. Would God be proud of me if I yelled at him and said I wasn't going to let life pull me down?"

 "Would you be proud if your child said it?"

 "Hell yeah!" said Freda, popping in. "I'd be proud of my kid for being that powerful."

 "Well, what about God?"

 "I believe in a loving God," said Freda.

 "Wouldn't you be a loving parent?"

 "You bet I would."

 "Isn't God as great?'

 Silence.

 "What about the rest of you guys? What are you into?"

 I just wanted a college education," I said. "My folks always assumed I would go to college. I wanted a liberal arts education. The school assumes that you will choose a major. I chose English Literature."

 "Sounds great to me," said Lee.

 "Do you know of the doctor Patch Adams?" Zane asked. "They made a movie by that name. He wanted to help people."

 "That's what I want," Carolyn said.

 "He was quite a rebel," Zane continued, "He wanted to create a hospital where people helped each other. No one charged a patient a fee. The medical personnel worked for the facility. Doctors treated people because they were licensed to do that. No one used insurance. The trouble was, no one donated to build a hospital either. They had a clinic for a while, but the doctors had to work outside the clinic to afford to work in it. Yet, thousands of doctors apply for positions at his facility.  Can you imagine?"

 "Yes, I can," said Carolyn. "A dream is more important than a big fat paycheck. I prefer to be happy."

 "That was sort of Patch's principle, 'When you treat a disease,' Patch said, 'you win some, you lose some. When you treat a person, I guarantee you win, no matter the outcome.'"

 "Wow!" said Carolyn. "What a concept. Treat the person, assist their happiness.  I'm there. Where is that person, Patch Adams?" Is he still alive?"

 "Yep, in Hillsboro, West Virginia. He has 300 gorgeous pristine acres of farm and mountain land," continued Zane. "Donated by a man he met in a mental hospital—no hospital yet, but I heard that after 40 years of working to raise funds, he has finally broken ground for a hospital."

 "I'm going to research that," said Carolyn. "Isn't that phenomenal? Girls", she turned to Freda and me. "How about after we graduate, we give ourselves a trip to West Virginia?"

 "Sounds good to me," I said. “My dream is to be a columnist, like my parents used to read in the newspapers. However, colonists are virtually non-existent now, but writers still write. Going to West Virginia would give me good material."

 "And me," said Freda, "those 300 acres in West Virginia intrigue me. I'm a farmer at heart."

 "I'm so excited," said Carolyn. "There I was grumbling about how things don't work, and how hard it is, now I have a new focus, treat the person, not the disease. That takes the pressure off. Our job isn't to keep people alive forever, it's to help them live while they are alive."

 "To affect the quality of the day is the highest of the arts, to quote Henry David Thoreau," Felicity added.

 "For the better, I hope," said Frank.

 "Yeah, maybe he should have clarified that."

 "Is that what you guys are doing here?" Carolyn turned to Zane and Felicity."

 "I think she has our number," said Zane.

 

5

A Dip 

  

  "I need a break after all this serious talk," Frank said. "I'm going for a swim," He began, unzipping his trousers.

 "Frank!" exclaimed Alice.

 "It's dark," he said, and I'm not wearing wet clothing when I get out of the water. Look the other way."

 He moved a distance away, dropped his trousers, and ran toward the water—all we could see was a white butt disappearing into the night.

 "Well," Alice said, "I shouldn't let him be out there all alone in the dark," and pushed up from her blanket and moved into the darkness.

 The three of us girls looked at each other. Carolyn dropped her shorts, and with a "Whooppee," ran toward the surf—followed by two others—us.

 The surf slapped me with a chill, but Hawaii’s waters are almost bath-tub warm. I felt free, surrounded by the gorgeous night and laughing people around me, which gave me an energy jolt.

 I could see my way back to the others for the fire lighted the way. When we ran from the water toward the encampment, Felicia met us with a blanket, holding it as we ran into it, then wrapping us as though we were Princesses of the Nile.

 Zane brought out cups and a thermos of coffee.

 "I appreciated the butt parade," said Lee.

 Zane pulled a ukulele from his wagon and began to strum it softly. When he started a rousing tune, Felicia began dancing. "I know a little hula. "Come on, join me." She began swaying her hips and moving her hands. These are the little fishes," she said, holding her two hands together and making waving motions.

 "Come on, guys, stand up swing your hips."

 Clothes first. We ran under the cover of darkness, slipped into our clothing, and came back.

 "I want to go back to my little grass shack in Kealakekua, Hawaii," sang Felicia.

 We repeated swinging our hips and trying to copy her hand movements as we repeated her phrase.

 When she got to the end, 'Where the HumuhumuNukunukuapuaa goes swimming by,' we were on the sand laughing.

 "Okay, guys," she said, "You cannot leave Hawaii without learning our State fish's name, Humuhumunukunuku a puaa."

 “Repeat after me: “Hoo-moo-hoo-moo-noo-koo-noo-koo-ah-poo-ah-ah, You can't go home until you've learned it."

 "Let's just move here," I said.

 "Tell them a story, Zane," Felicia said.

 We all cuddled around the campfire, sharing blankets, and expectantly looking at Zane. “Story, story, story!” we chanted.

 

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Monday, May 30, 2022

Hey Writers, Do You Do this?

Have you become attached to your protagonist's name and had difficulty changing it? 

 

So, why do it?

 

This morning I searched for a new last name for my male hero. I had chosen one but kept spelling it differently. I would use an "a" or an "e "or an "o." 

 

The first name was firm. The problem was the last name's meaning, spelling, and connotation.

 

So, I changed it. 

 

I guess I'll live with the new name for a while and see if it sticks. I need to make sure I changed the old name to the new one on the over twenty pages where I used it. How embarrassing it is to find your hero's name on page 5 is different from the one on page 35.

 

You know, too, how most every author wants to be published by a major publishing house. (You, too, huh?)

 

Well, I'm wondering about that. Yes, we want the validation. We want to believe our work is worthy of being published. But is it?

 

I read a published short story yesterday. The writer used exquisite language, crafted his story beautifully, had a great concept, but ended with a huh? 

 

Don't be cute, I thought. I spent time reading your material, so give me something meaningful that contributes to my life. (Maybe it's just me.) 

 

Once I found a publisher who agreed to publish my manuscript The Frog's Song.

It's not a children's  book ns some think, but the story of my family selling our house, horses, goats, chickens, ducks, packing up our belongings and moving to a tropical Island...and back.

 


The publisher somehow took a shine to me, and I to her. Not only was she the publisher, but she personally edited my manuscript. We had a lovely time corresponding back and forth—at least I did. I loved her. 

 

I don't think my publisher wants me anymore, for I didn't make much money selling my book.

 

And even though my lovely publisher/editor paid for the books, the cover, her time in editing, printing costs, then three books ffor free, except for listing on her site and others like Amazon and Barnes and Noble, the marketing fell on my shoulders. Well, I stunk at that. Plus, part of the deal was that I couldn't sell the book unless I was physically present for the sale. 

 

So, tell me, dear readers, what do you think of self-publishing? Going the publisher route took TWO YEARS from acceptance to print--longer than a pregnancy, and that seemed long.

 

Publishing houses have to charge more for their books to cover costs. Although, hallelujah, there is Kindle unlimited. You can sometimes read for free or buy a book for less than the old-time way of purchasing a physical copy.

 

How invested are you in price? 

 

If the book is listed with a blurb on Amazon and says buy this book, what's the difference if you publish it or a Publishing House does?

 

Oh, prestige. 

 

Readers can trust the material more if a publishing house has released it. At least someone thought it had merit.

 

One needs to buy my physical book to see and feel the cover. It has a glorious texture. And the book smells new, and it has pages you can bookmark and find again. Plus, it looks pretty on the shelf. 

 

The trouble is, its blurb says it is a "light-hearted journey."

 

It wasn't. 

 

I had gotten discouraged and neglected the Frog's Song site, for I was getting more malicious hits than viewers. I checked in today, placed a spam stop on it, and listened to OZ sing, "Over the rainbow."

 

Wow. Oz's rendition thrills me every time I hear it. Listen to it. It will calm your spirit and give you Hawaii lust. I see his video has gotten over a million views. 

 

The Hawaiians symbolize the rainbow as the pathway from which they descended to Earth, and it is the way we will all return. 

 


              We saw many Rainbows in Hawaii, and Oregon is a top contender.

 

To hear s Oz singing "Over the Rainbow,"  click on the link.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I

 

Regarding book, The Frog's Song:

 

Amazon.com is now selling The Frog's Song, Kindle version for  $3.61.

 

The Paperback is $3.80. (That's cheaper than the ones I bought at the beginning of this venture.)

 

Dear readers, if we don't promote, we don't sell.

 

And another thing an author must face is that you might end up on the sale table. 

 

So, let's get with this. If you have not read the book, now's the time. It's selling at a reasonable price, and it's likely to go away real soon.

 

Here's the link:  The Frog's Song

To read what ended up on the editing floor, please go to my blog on thefrogssong.com.

Here's a portion: If you've read it. Skip it.

 

 “Leaving the Island”

 

We were packed.

Husband Dear was driving a rented van, for the vehicles had already sailed away on a cargo ship bound for L.A. 

 

I sat in the passenger seat with my little dog, Peaches, on my lap. In the back seat, Daughter Dear shared space with her year-old son, a laptop, a diaper bag, and a purse while trying to avoid being set upon by Bear, a 150-pound Newfoundland dog.

 

Behind her, the dog carrier with its top nested inside the bottom held cat carriers holding Hope and Zoom Zoom. We were aiming for the airport on the other side of the Island.

 

Moments ago, I said goodbye to the house, the yard, and the Tiki room across the expanse of green. I watched the green enlivened grass almost every morning as though the goddess was turning up her rheostat.

 

Alongside the road, deep canyons carry water out to sea. From the bridges over those ravines, we looked over that incredible green dotted with red flowers that sit atop 100-foot trees like parrots.

 

Fifty miles from home, a flagger stopped us. "A tanker rolled over," he said. "It will take half a day to clean up the spill." He waved us away with no suggestion of an alternative route.

 

We sat dumbfounded.

 

Our belongings were gone, the car and truck were gone, and that tip-over probably scared the bejeesus out of the driver.

 

Bear needed to be deposited with United Cargo by 9 a.m. as United Airlines demanded he go Cargo, and we had arranged connections in L.A.

 

We were in shock.

 

A roadblock.

 

A back seat scream: "Get Me off this Damn Island!"

 

Husband and I stared at each other as angry purple ooze spread through the vehicle. "Take Saddle Road!" We say in unison. So, we backtracked the 40-miles back toward Hilo to where Saddle Road exited the highway.

 

We drove the one-lane Saddle Road up and over the mountain, down the ravines, over single-lane bridges, and across the Texas look-alike countryside with more cars this morning than other times. We arrived at United Cargo before the nine o'clock deadline.

 

However, as Daughter Dear spoke with the forklift driver and with him shaking his head, I knew the results looked bad.

 

The dog kennel had been modified. The driver would not take it. Continental Airlines carried Bear from the mainland to Honolulu in it. Aloha Airlines Cargo carried him to the Big Island in it. No amount of my pleading would get that dog in that carrier on board that airship.

 

Okay, we raced over to Pet Co, where—miracle of miracles—they had the largest airline-approved kennel available. The last time we visited that store, they had none.

 

Daughter dear bought the new, expensive, airline-approved kennel. It would be a tight fit for Bear, but we figured he would have to manage.

 

We raced back to Cargo. We fit the top and bottom of the carrier together, tightened the wingnuts, and asked Bear to try it. "And, compliant dog that he was, he climbed in. You couldn't ask for a better dog.

 

They told us they would not load him on the noon flight and that we had to go that night at eight o'clock.

 

We raced to the airport ticketing, where a man changed all our tickets to the 8 p.m. flight. Ah. We go back and rescue Bear from the confinement and the heat.

 

"Be back at 2 p.m.," they told us.

 

Two o'clock for an eight o'clock flight?

 

Okay, we were back at 2 p.m. We deposited Bear at Cargo and went into town for a bite to eat with the other animals in tow. Along the way, we got a phone call.

 

Someone somewhere canceled our flight.

 

They scheduled us to leave the following morning at ten o'clock. I envisioned a hot night in the car, as the hotels on the Island are not pet-friendly. And there was Bear confined in a kennel that fit him like a wet suit.

 

We go back to the airport. Daughter reminded us that the Cargo hold closes at 3 p.m., which means Bear was locked in—oh, that was why he had to be deposited at two o'clock. We must wait until 6 p.m. as no person occupies the ticketing booth until then. We encountered other passengers in the open-air waiting area who received the same phone call we did. "What happened?" asks one. "The plane didn't leave San Francisco," says another.

 

Bottom line: no plane.

 

Nina and I shake our heads at the irony, how the Island called us, how it got us there, and how we thought it was pushing us off. But we were still on.

 

I would have laughed, except as I sat there on the bench at the airport, I felt like the little anole I accidentally painted into the porch steps. I didn't mean to do it, dusk was settling in, and I didn't see that a little lizard was in my paint path. Instead, I found his flat little body the following morning, a lizard relief in the gray-blue porch paint.

 

I felt like that little lizard—stuck.

 

So, we sat in a hot, humid airport waiting in Island time for a ticket booth to open. Six o'clock, they said. No one occupied the booth until six. Okay. We waited.

 

Daughter and her son entertained themselves with travel brochures—a fiery volcano, horseback rides, helicopter rides, zip lines, orchid farms. Husband Dear, read a book. Peaches stretched out on her stomach on the cool cement. The cats were quiet in their carriers. And Bear? You know where he was, in lock up.

 

My mind wandered back to the house we left behind only a few hours earlier. It is vacant, alone. But it isn't alone. The neighbor's horses will be right outside. They are using our property for pasture. The neighbors will mow the property in return for free pasture. Jeff, the carpenter we hired to bring the Tiki Room up to building permit standards, will live in it. He will watch out for the house and keep the property looking lived-in until it sells.

 

I called our neighbor and told her she could have dog carrier that my husband has made into a stretch limo, if she would drive to the airport and get it.

 

I thought about my horses and how we wanted those ten acres for them but didn't ship them. I thought about the sad day I gave them away and how my Daughter gave away her two horses.

 

 "You can hold me," I told the Universe, "you can rain on me, mosquitoes can chew on me, dark energies can roll over us, but you can't keep me here. You can give Husband heart trouble to make him leave—he was happy here, he would have stayed, but I am not having him die here. None of us are dying here. We want to live, and it will be beyond the horizon that we do it!"

What?

I felt a jiggle as my little grandson crawled up beside me on the bench. My telephone/clock whispered to me that it was 6 o'clock.

In-mass we go to the ticketing counter.

 Whatever caused the log-jam of this day's events was about to burst. I could feel it. It was not without fear, however, that we approached the desk.

 Karen, the ticketing person, a take-command lady, changed our tickets to another plane scheduled to leave that evening at 8:55 p.m.

 That night!

 

After a stop-over in San Francisco, we were scheduled to arrive in Los Angeles around nine in the morning. I was stunned. HAPPY DAY!

Lovely Karen called Cargo to have Bear shuttled over to our plane. She checked in all four animals, had them taken aboard, checked our carry-on bags—they didn't charge us for that service—and bumped us up to first class. We were off—just like that. (And we arrived in L.A. earlier than we would have on our initial schedule.)

 In First Class, there was food for the family and a glass of wine for me. I settled down with the prayer, "Get us to the mainland," and lay my head against the seat's headrest.

 

We taxied down the runway.

 

Wait?

 

What was that I heard?

 

It was Peaches, our poodle. I didn't know the animals were right beneath us. She could hear us, and every passenger on the plane could hear her. And so embarrassed, not claiming we knew who belonged to that dog, we sailed out over the ocean to the tune of, "Yap, Yap, Yap, Yap, Yap, Yap, yap…

 

 Book link: https://www.amazon.com/Frogs-Song-Joyce-Davis-ebook/dp/B07K3XW21T/ref=sr_1_1?crid=10I8DU8CJSN9G&keywords=the+frog%27s+song+by+joyce+davis&

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